Greencloak Message Board: Warrior cat story 2!!!
When Bearkit dies we'll be best friends!
Tigerstar! Don't think like that!
You do realize hes still a kit and won't die anytime soon right?
I knew that
*snorts* And they called me a mouse brain
Fawnnettle knows what she's doing
hmph. And hedgehogs fly.
Good job on the chapters! Can't wait to read more! :3!!!
What do you think our kits are going to be like?
Have your swiftness, and my strength
And your boasting skills, you'll make a good father *snorts and lays down*
You need to make sure you know who your enemy is up against! *Holds head up higher*
Yes, yes, they'll know that their up against a stupid and lazy kittypet
Shouldn't Fawnnettle be taking care of her kits?
No. -snorts- She's too mouse-brained to even guess that she should do that! -Whacks Wildkit on her head-
Stooooop! Fawnnettle! Creekkit called you a dumb mouse-brain!
-gulps- I didn't do that! he did! -points his tail at Runningkit
No I didn't! Creekkit is lying!
You can quit arguing. I know Creekkit called me that. That's because he's a mouse-brain.
Quit arguing with Fawnnettle. It isn't nice to call anyone names.
-groans- ok, Swiftbreeze.
Forgot to add!
Cats outside the Clans
Tar- Tom, rogue.
May- she-cat, rogue.
Dare- Tom, rogue
Pearl- White she-cat with long fur and feathery tail, blue eyes. Kittypet.
Hero- Bronze-colored Tom with a sleek glossy pelt. Pearl's mate, kittypet.
Lily of the Valley- pretty long haired she-cat that's white with bronze spots, long feathery tail. Blue eyes, Pearl's kit.
(Lily of the Valley as In the type of flower.)
Chapter two- The Gathering
Risingstar signaled with his tail for his warriors to follow him into the clearing. By the scent of it, Spiritclan was already there. Her paws tingled with excitement as she bounded after her leader. My first gathering as a warrior! Wait till I tell Blizzardpaw! Spiritclan was mulling around the clearing, and heads shot up as Wildclan approached. Risingstar headed over to Cheetahstar, who was talking to her deputy Ravenpelt, a black she-cat with brown paws and belly. Pumapelt scanned the clearing until she found Blizzardpaw. He was sitting by a russet-colored tom. The tom sat up straight, eyes shining. What was his name? Oh right, Redpaw! I remember playing with him as a kit! Pumapelt started to walk over, feeling sort of shy. She felt Flamepaw's pelt brush her's as he trotted over. "Going to see Blizzardpaw?" He asked. "Yeah," she replied. She walked the rest of the way over to Blizzardpaw and Redpaw with Flamepaw. Blizzardpaw waved his tail at her when he spotted her. "Pumapaw! Blizzardpaw!" They both said at the same time, then let out a mrrow of laughter. "It's Pumapelt, I got my warrior name," she said. "And I'm Blizzardtail," her brother said. "I got my warrior name to," said Redpaw, puffing his chest out. "I'm Redclaw," then his eyes flicked over to Flamepaw. "Who's he?" Redclaw asked. Was that reproach in his mew? "This is Flamepaw," she said. Flamepaw nodded his head, and for a few minutes Flamepaw and Redclaw looked at each other. What's going on with them? Then she saw Redclaw look away from Flamepaw and looked at Pumapelt again. His eyes flickered. Did she just see jealousy? Redclaw turned and padded away, and so did Flamepaw. Pumapelt looked over at Blizzardtail, who was giving her a funny look. "What?" She asked. "Does Flamepaw always follow you around?" He asked. Pumapelt realized what he was saying. "He doesn't like me!" She said, with a hint of a snarl. "And I don't understand Redclaw's deal," she huffed. Blizzardtail blinked at her calmly. "Okay, okay," he said. Before they could say anymore, they heard Cheetahstar's yowl, signaling the start of the gathering. She dipped her head to Risingstar, who took a pace forward on the big maple tree the two leaders used. "Prey has been plentiful in Wildclan. We also have two new warriors. Fernpool and Pumapelt," he said. Cats cheered, and Pumapelt felt her pelt grow hot, as the cats looked over at her. She wanted to shrink inside her pelt, but she kept her chin up. She spotted Fernpool, who seemed nervous to. Risingstar took a step back and Cheetahstar took a pace forward. "Prey is running well in Spiritclan, thank Starclan we didn't have a dry Green-leaf. We also have four new warriors. Amberfeather, Thornheart, Redclaw, and Blizzardtail," she said. The cats cheered, and Pumapelt cheered the loudest for Blizzardtail. Amberfeather sat with a dignified expression on her face, chin held high. Thornheart's eyes gleamed, and Redclaw looked like he would practically burst with pride. Blizzardtail just flicked his ear and stared cooly ahead. Then he looked at Pumapelt, and she touched noses with him. "We're finally warriors!"
Pumapelt trekked back to camp with the rest of the cats. She walked with Fernpool, and watched as Flamepaw trotted ahead. Pumapelt felt a pang of disappointment that he wasn't walking with her. When Wolffrost fell into step next to Fernpool, she seized her chance and quickened her pace until she was walking with Flamepaw. She didn't know how to start at first, but Flamepaw broke the silence. "Do you miss Blizzardtail a lot?" He asked. "Why, Yes," she replied, rather startled by the question. Flamepaw hesitated before asking: "Do you happen to miss Redclaw?" She was even more startled by that question. "No," she said firmly. Flamepaw seemed to brighten and his energetic liveliness returned. "I'm hungry! I wonder if they'll be any prey left on the pile," he said. "Not after you've gone through it," she purred. Suddenly the patrol stopped. Two golden eyes peered out of the bushes. She held her breath and felt Flamepaw tense beside her. Was it a fox? A rogue? The undergrowth trembled, and the creature popped out. It was Wildkit! "Wow! It's so cool out here during the night! I followed you guys, I'm a good tracker aren't I?" Squeaked the golden-kit with white paws and tail tip. Her smile faded when her words were met with silence. "Is that kit crazy being out here?" Growled Hawktalon, finally. "Swiftbreeze is going to kill her," Fernpool muttered in Wolffrost's ear. "Not if a fox or owl kills her first," hissed Owltalon, a light brown tom with dark brown spots, who was recently made a warrior, who had been standing near Fernpool. "I think she should be put on elder duty," he said, walking up to stand next to Hawktalon, who had been Owltalon's mentor. "Risingstar, what do you think we should do?" Silvershine asked Risingstar, who had been quiet. "We take her back of course. Then we'll decide her punishment," he said. Wildkit slumped as she was nudged back to camp. Pumapelt felt a pang of sympathy for the kit- after all she meant no harm. "Kits," muttered Owltalon, rolling his eyes. "And I 'suppose you weren't ever a kit," muttered Flamepaw so only Pumapelt could hear. Owltalon was annoying and as arrogant as Hawktalon. Leopardpelt- though- didn't seem to mind. The brown she-cat trotted right up to him, her pelt brushing his. Their tails twined together. Eaglefeather- a tortoiseshell tom- who was Leopardpelt's brother rolled his eyes dramatically. Everyone was silent the rest of the way back to camp.
Just bc and to make things clearer: (mates)
Fawnnettle and Duskpelt
Aloebreeze and Featherlake
Sweetfeather and Scarear
Rosepetal and Wolffrost
Maplemist and Hawktalon
Ivyheart and Blacksound
Lightingstrike and Hailtail
Violetpelt and Darkshadow (no kits yet)
Dawnfur and Lionpride
Eclipse and Stormpelt
Lunarfrost and Stormrunner
Adderfang and Bobtail (no kits yet)
Leopardpelt and Owltalon, though they are still to young
Dreammist and Pouncefoot (no kits yet)
Honeydew and Whitefang
Sparrowtail and Blackbird
Emberflight and Foxsnatch
Hollyshine and Wolfbite
Icetail and Sandshine
Nettleclaw and Mudfoot
Viperfang and Hawkflight (no kits yet)
Also made a mistake! Sunspirit should be in Spiritclan
do you want Hopeblossom, Spiritstone, or Burstfur to become mates with anyone? (U can choose any of my cats idc. For closet age though I would say Lynxear, Birdfeather, Bramblebush, or someone. This is totally up to u.)
do you want Blossomheart or Bramblepelt to become mates with anyone?
the available cats are all the cats not on the mate list, and not someone's character (that still currently reads the story) unless they agree to it.
Cats not available Bc is someone else's character:
So Fawnheart already has a mate Tar still XD so she isn't available either way XD just making that clear
also, Thanks for adding Tar and Dare on the outside of clans list I didn't know if you were going to add them :)
Who is Swiftbreeze's mate? I am hoping for Mountainpaw to eventually become Creekkit's mate (When they are warriors, of course.)
I'm surprised that Creekkit didn't sneak out of camp with Wildkit... please don't make Wildkit's punishment too harsh like making her an apprentice after her littermates. I'm still laughing that she sneaked out of camp.
Could Wildkit have a role in finding the missing SpiritClan cats when she is an apprentice?
Swiftbreeze's mate was Flamepelt but he died. I won't make her punishment to harsh. I have not decided yet who will go on the mission. I was thinking to do at least one of everyone's character. Creekkit and Mountainpaw can become mates. I'm also going to make Wildkit and littermates apprentices soon.
Frostkit and Snowkit were the first to greet the returning patrol. "What happened? What was it like? Did anyone fight? Is the clan in trouble? New apprentices? Kits? Warriors?" They began bombarding the cats with questions. "Frostkit! Snowkit! Get back here," said Honeydew, voice stern but eyes full of love and affection. The two kits hesitated, then decided it was best to listen to their mother. Frostkit was a snow-white she-kit with Amber eyes. Snowkit was a white she-kit also, but had soft golden paws and blue eyes. Blizzardtail looked over at Redclaw, but he was already slipping into the warrior's den. He frowned. Some thing's up. Before he could make a move, Firepaw skidded to a halt in front of him. "Did you see Moonspirit?" The flame-colored apprentice asked eagerly. "Um... no," Blizzardtail replied. Why does she care? The she-cat's tail drooped. "Oh," she muttered, and walked away. Blizzardtail sighed and walked over to the fresh-kill pile. There wasn't much on it, but he plucked a vole-a rarer find- from the bottom and headed for the apprentice's den. He nosed his way inside. He found Redclaw curled up in his nest. Blizzardtail dropped the vole by his nose and nudged it closer to him. "Brought you some fresh-kill," he said. Redclaw opened his eyes and sniffed the vole, then closed them again. Blizzardtail sighed. "Do you want me to leave you a lone?" He asked. Redclaw didn't reply, so Blizzardtail took that as a yes. Outside, Ravenpelt called him over. "I want you and Redclaw on the dawn patrol tomorrow. Icetail will be leading it," she said. Blizzardtail nodded, and turned back towards the apprentice's den. When he got inside, he realized Redclaw really was asleep this time, along with Thornheart, Amberfeather, Foxsnatch, a sleek black Tom with orange-yellow eyes, and Blackbird, a smaller black tom with gray-blue eyes and fur that seemed to never lay completely flat. To his relief, the vole he brought Redclaw was gone. Blizzardtail thought about curling up in his own nest, but decided against it. Backing out of the den, he headed back over to the fresh-kill pile. Oakpaw was the only other one by the fresh kill pile. Blizzardtail grabbed a rabbit and settled somewhat across from him. "There's not much, but Cheetahstar sent out a hunting patrol," said Oakpaw, hooking up a mouse with his claws. The prey-pile did look pitiful, and now that he thought about it he could tell the rabbit was rather stale. Blizzardtail finished his food quickly- as to avoid conversation with Oakpaw, got up and stretched. "Well, cya tomorrow," he yawned. Oakpaw flicked his tail. "Ya, goodnight."
Blizzardtail nudged Redclaw with his paw. "Wake up, were on the dawn patrol," he said. Redclaw muttered, rolled over, and batted him lightly with his paw. Blizzardtail nudged him harder in the ribs. "Gah!" Redclaw scrambled to his paws. "I'm awake, I'm awake!" He said, and started grooming himself. "Redclaw we're going to be late!" Blizzardtail hissed. "But I need to be clean," frowned Redclaw. Honestly, what has gotten into him? "Fine. Meet me by the fresh-kill pile," he grunted. Blizzardtail turned and headed out of the den, and padded over to the fresh-kill pile. It had been restocked last night, so he had plenty to choose from. He picked a mouse, and devoured it. Icetail, Berryheart, Blackbird, and Hollyshine, a brown she-cat with a dappled pelt and yellow eyes, were already waiting by the entrance. Blizzardtail glanced over to the warriors den, and fortunately saw Redclaw slipping out. He strutted over to the fresh-kill pile, and devoured a sparrow in a few famished bites. Blizzardtail stifled a laugh as feathers clung to his nose. Redclaw swiped them off, then headed over to Icetail's dawn patrol. Blizzardtail followed. The cool breeze felt good, as it whispered through his fur. Though he missed his sister and father in the forest, he never regretted moving to the meadow. There was just so much open space to run! He could tell all the warriors were a little jumpy, and Blizzardtail could feel the beginning Leaf-fall chill creeping into his green-leaf pelt. Icetail flicked her ear. "I guess it won't hurt to get warmed up on a little run to our borders," she said. Flicking her tail, she started off at a run. The warriors followed her, tail's streaming behind them. Blizzardtail flattened his ears against his head as he ran. Glancing down, he saw his paws were only a blur. He wanted to yowl with joy. As much as he loved this run, he had wanted to talk to Redclaw. Oh well, I'll do it later. In no time the first border came in sight: The Wildclan border. Icetail slowed her pace, and so did the rest of the warriors. When they neared the border Blizzardtail picked up a fresh scent of Wildclan. Suddenly a patrol came into view. The patrol was lead by Duskpelt, a long-haired orange tom, and what was unique about his pelt was it got lighter towards the top. "Hello, Icetail," he dipped his head to the mostly white she-cat with Sapphire colored eyes. The cats with Duskpelt were Thornpelt, a black Tom with green eyes, Moonspirit, a white tom with dark orange ear tips and paws they almost look red, and golden tail tip with hints of orange and green eyes, Blossomheart, a honey colored she-cat with white on the tip of her tail, chest, stomach, and paws, and Amber colored eyes. Blizzardtail also spotted his sister, Pumapelt. Lastly Raincloud, a gray-blue tom with blue eyes and flecks of black scattered on his pelt. Raincloud's sister, Cloverface, was Spiritclan's medicine cat. "Duskpelt," Icetail dipped her head to him. Icetail signaled for Redclaw to refresh the markers. Redclaw strutted up, chest puffed out, and eyes on Pumapelt. Why is he acting so bee-brained? Then it hit him. Redclaw likes Pumapelt!
When Redclaw finished and the patrol set off again, Blizzardtail fell into step beside him. "What is wrong with you?" He hissed in his ear. Redclaw blinked guiltily. "Nothing." Blizzardtail flicked his ear. "You like Pumapelt, don't you?" He said. Redclaw sighed. "Yes. If only she could have come to Spiritclan! I don't think she likes me, anyway," Redclaw said. Blizzardtail never heard his friend sound so miserable. "Don't feel bad. I don't think Pumapelt likes anyone," Blizzardtail told him. When Redclaw didn't look convinced, he added, "Not even Flamepaw." Redclaw straightened up. "Okay," he said. "But remember, she's in another clan. You must not break the warrior code," he said. This seemed to bring Redclaw's spirits down again. "Well, it's not like your the only cat. I'm pretty sure Firepaw likes Moonspirit." They were both silent the rest of the patrol. When they made it back the camp, Firepaw bounded over to Blizzardtail. "Did you see Moonspirit
draaaama of love
ok here is what this is like
boy one: -stares at her with him- -sees his strength and makes shoulders bigger- hmph
"Him": -smiling with her and laughing at her jokes- -sighs happily-
boy ones friend: -looking at boy one confused why he is acting odd- -greets her-
-him: -fixes hair and stares at boy one with pride next to her-
her: -eyes widen thinking is boy one jealous!?-