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Erin Cahill suddenly awoke from a dreamless sleep to running water from the bathroom. She sat straight up, seeing a skinny rectangle of light on the wall in front of her. She looked around her hotel room. Since she was an orphan, she had gotten strange jobs to earn money. This was her last night she was able to stay, with only enough money to but a little bit of food and water tomorrow. She saw the bathroom door slightly open, and, with squinted eyes, she stepped out of bed, placing her bare feet onto the cold hardwood floor. She tip-toed over to the door, and pushed it open. She was kicked to the ground, and a bag of some sort was thrown over her head.
Erin was pinned down with a strong grip, and although she struggled, she couldn't escape. She felt her wrists and ankles being tied. She then was lifted up and placed into what seemed to be a laundry cart. Erin's captives covered her with towels, making it impossible to move. She was rolled out of her room and down the hall. Between the bag and towels, it was very difficult to breathe. Before passing out, she thought, What if I d*e?
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