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The story starts with the prologue. A lion named Bruno is walking through the Pridelands when he hears a loud noise. Panicked, thinking it's an attack, he flees. He doesn't see where he is running, and falls into the river. He is swept downstream until he manages to pull himself out. He finds himself in the Outlands. Brutus walks up, and snarls. Bruno jumps up and begs Brutus not to hurt him, if he will join Brutus. Brutus agrees. The story progresses. Mangus is sitting on the huge rock in his Pride's territory. Rock is playing with his sister, River. Suddenly, one of the lions, Berry, starts growling. A hyena is barking, and soon, joined by more barks. The hyenas charge in. Mangus leaps at them and fights them. Just as the last hyena flees, Bruno appears. He snarls at Mangus, and tells him that he and his son will never be fit as kings. Bruno then runs after the hyenas. As the story keeps progressing, chaos breaks loose. The hyenas keep attacking, and soon, Bruno joins them. It is getting harder and harder to keep them from invading. As the end of the story draws near, a huge fight breaks loose on the cliff. More animals join the fight: a cheetah, a honey badger, and a zebra. The zebra kicks at some of the animals, the honey badger sprays some of them, and the cheetah races around some of them to keep them from attacking. Mangus chases Brutus close to the cliff edge, and suddenly, Brutus turns and attacks him. Mangus tries to jump away and starts falling. He grabs onto the side of the cliff. Bruno walks over, and growls. He says that he will be king, not Rock. Bruno then lunges at Mangus and knocks him off the cliff. Angry, Rock runs up behind Bruno and bravely attacks him. Soon, he flees, and the fight is over. In the epilogue, all the baby animals have grown up. Rock has a mate named Honey. Rock has become king. Rock walks towards the Gorge of the Elders. As he nears, Bruno attacks him. Rock runs and at the edge of the Gorge, turns on Bruno. Taken by surprise, Bruno leaps sideways and lands right at the edge of the gorge. Rock doesn't notice, and attacks. As Bruno falls, Rock lunges to try to save him, but misses. When Honey questions him, he says that despite what Bruno did, he didn't want him dead. Just then, Rock's cubs, Wave and Rain, walk over. Rain pounces on Wave, who squeaks as she is pushed over. Rock says that he'll be proud when Rain becomes king. Then he says "This may be the end of the chaos, but the story is just beginning," hinting that there will be another story.

 

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Dash

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"It is always a matter of choice, and sometimes the heart speaks the loudest"