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The setting is capturing the remaining Oathbound and putting them in trial, and possible things that could happen after their trial.

I would be assigning people as characters. To request for a specific character do something like this in a post:

i would like like to be kalani 

 

Character list:

Olvan

 

lenori

 

Conor

Briggan

Abeke

Uraza

Meilin

Jhi

Rollan

Essix

Kana

Brunhild

Sid

New characters:

Horen the Furious - New Oathbound leader

Entha - Greencloak

Orth - Oathbound soldier

Jarth - Oathbound soldier

If you have any more character ideas reply and I will consider and you can make your own

thanks and have fun!

 

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Hi Rysun,

Could you post the entire list of characters so far? Thanks. :D

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Hi, it's me again.

Regarding Horen's Oathbound title, I just got a lot of ideas. That was mainly because I was imagining what kind of person he is, and this is what I got...

Horen is easily angered because of an unforgiving personality. He always holds grudges for the past and towards people. Therefore, I thought to maybe call him Horen the Forgiving. Other names I thought of are Horen the Pleasant, Horen the Affectionate, Horen the Amicable, Horen the Merciful, Horen the Lenient, Horen the Tolerant, and Horen the Clement. These are all the words I could think of. Hopefully one of them is appropriate because I absolutely can't think of any more.

I should explain each one. Since he has such a rough personality he is surely pleasant to be around. (Ironic.) If he has such a bad temper he is certainly affectionate to everyone. Add with his personality he can surely get along with everyone. (Amicable, huh?) I thought of him as having no mercy, as going with Horen the Forgiving. (Horen the Merciful.) "Lenient" basically means merciful, or tolerant. (Horen the Lenient, Horen the Tolerant.) And "clement" means mild or merciful. Anyways, hope this helps.

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Hi RuoHan

 

I like the sound of Horen the Forgiving

 

Thanks for the effort you put in!

 

 

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Hey RuoHan

 

I honestly like Horen the Forgiving the most

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NiHao Rysun,

No problem. I think to think a lot; no effort there.

So, Horen the Forgiving finally has a fitting title! :D

Is CrimsonNight on here yet? Because I haven't seen him/her yet... Though both of you are my friends.

Are there any new applicants? :D

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Yeah I have to find Zia, and I told the newcomer on the other post (forestclue) to come to this post

 

And just wondering do you speak fluent Chinese?

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Yeah, if the number of people continues to only be you, Zia, forestclue, and me, this RP isn't really going to go anywhere fast.

And yes, I speak, read, and write Chinese fluently. Do you?

(The only reason why I don't write Chinese on here is because the mods will probably deny my access to the forums.)

 

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I can speak basics fluently and am learning to read and write

 

It is cool you can

 

Please try to spread this roleplay

 

Oh and should I change it to unlimited spots because you can make your own characters’?

 

 

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I actually don't know, because if you change it to unlimited spots everyone will make their own character. Ummm

I really don't know

It should be something in between unlimited and limited, but neither of which really fits.

This makes for another situation...

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By the way could you get on chat on a new tab? That way communication is much easier. :P

Thanks, Rysun.

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So you mean a new thread for chatting?

 

Got it!

 

And please tell me I spelled your name right:

 

RuoHan 

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Yeah... I meant that.

And yes you got my name right: 若寒.

How do you write your name in Chinese...?

And please tell me the name of the thread because I'm absolutely terrible at finding things on the forums :P. Thanks! :D

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Beware Dragon's Eye Spoilers in this Roleplay!!!

 

Here all the rules and regulations:

 

I understand that some characters don't like/hate each other, but over the top rudeness will result in removal from the roleplay and if the person comes back and continues and does not apologize, they would be reported.

 

Please refrain from any harsh language and substitutes for curse words as different people have different tolerances for such things.

 

Please try to refrain from arguments and do not make any situation worse by harsh language and you must report it to me (Dragondolphin2613), CrimsonNight142 (As soon as he/she finds this thread), and/or ScarletDragon3016 (He is currently on this thread).  

 

Thank you very much!

 

Now for an updated character list/available roles:

 

Original Characters:

 

Kalani-Open

 

Lenori-Open

 

Conor-Open

 

Abeke-Open

 

Meilin-Open

 

Rollan-Open

 

Kana the Honest-Open

 

Brunhild the Merry-Open

 

Sid the Generous-Open

 

Newly created (By me) characters:

 

Horen the Forgiving:New Oathbound Resistance Leader-Open

 

Entha:New Female Greencloak-Open

 

Orth:Male Oathbound Soldier- Open

 

Jarth:Male Oathbound Soldier-Open

 

He Xi Ye:Custom Zhongese Character by Scarletdragon3016-Closed

 

Alison Shaw: Custom Euran Character by CrimsonNight142-Closed

 

Chu Shan Ming: Custom Zhongese Character by Dragondolphin2613-Closed

 

Beware: If you make a custom character you need to include a bio, abilities, spirit animal(description if so), and age(optional)

 

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http://spiritanimals.scholastic.com/forums/topics/329908

 

That is the link of the thread

 

It's name is a chat thread for crimsonnight142, scarletdragon3016 and I

 

It is embarrassing and as I am learning Chinese I don't know hot to write my name in Chinese...

 

I will learn how and tell you

 

And quick question, do you do martial arts?

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Rysun, I closed Meilin's character because someone requested it. And I added Wikam the Just (but I can't remember if he's deceased or not?)

 And I'm honored that you gave me a "report-to" role. :D

 

Now for a EVEN MORE updated character list/available roles:

 

Original Characters:

 

Kalani-Open

 

Lenori-Open

 

Conor-Open

 

Abeke-Open

 

Meilin-Closed (Taken by forestclue25)

 

Rollan-Open

 

Kana the Honest-Open

 

Brunhild the Merry-Open

 

Sid the Generous-Open

 

Wikam the Just-Open

 

Newly created (By Rysun) characters:

 

Horen the Forgiving: New Oathbound Resistance Leader-Open

 

Entha: New Female Greencloak-Open

 

Orth: Male Oathbound Soldier- Open

 

Jarth: Male Oathbound Soldier-Open

 

Taken Characters: 

Xi Ye He: Custom Zhongese Leader Character by Scarletdragon3016-Closed

 

Alison Shaw: Custom Euran Character by CrimsonNight142-Closed

 

Chu Shan Ming: Custom Zhongese Character by Dragondolphin2613-Closed

 

Beware: If you make a custom character you need to include a bio, abilities, spirit animal(description if so), and age(optional)

 

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I already got onto the thread... :D

Don't feel embarrassed, everything that is worth learning comes with time :D

And I'm looking forward to seeing your name

And I feel embarrassed now because I feel like I already know you in real life, because I do martial arts :P

That's why my character does it too...

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I found both new threads so see ya on the chat thread.

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Here is the form for custom characters:

 

Name:

Age:

Gender:

Apearance:

Outfit:

Personality:

Spirit animal species:

spirit animal name:

Backround:

Other:

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Character profile: XiYe He (no Oathbound title, he's not a Oathbound soldier/leader.)

Character occupation: General, High Command Master, Leader of ...(Idk what organization he is the leader of for now. Will update.)

This means that the character is in charge of both fighting strategically and on the battlefield. 

 

Character description: He is Zhongenese. He has somewhat dark skin, brown eyes with a strong red tint (that makes it seem like his eyes glow with red), and he is supposedly described as very handsome. However, he wants to terrify his enemies so he wears a mask, because his appearance is too pleasant to be feared at all. (I'm sorry, but I like the way my game character looks, with just a few updates.) He has dark raven hair that is long but is tied back whenever he is on a battlefield. 

Usually he wears full-body armor, including a helmet. He is seen using all sorts of traditional Zhongenese weapons, such as maces, bows, crossbows, firearms, broadswords, chainwhips, double-edged swords, spears, staffs, et cetera, et cetera. He rides a thousand-miles horse (in Chinese this would mean his horse is one of the best in speed and stamina), and he is fatally efficient with his weapons and fighting technique.

He is about fourteen years old and is considered to be out of the ordinary in all aspects.

 

Character Traits: He is actually thoughtful and highly intelligent, and he doesn't fall for tricks. He isn't completely evil, however, because he does not like to harm anyone other than his enemies. He hates being ridiculed, taunted, or underestimated. He is brutal while fighting for his beliefs, but he is loyal to those who are loyal to him.

 

Character Background: This character was born in Zhong but was from an early age taken from his family. He was trained at multiple training grounds, but this was because everywhere he went the place would burn down within one month. His bitterness comes from the fact that everyone has feared him from birth, because he is said to bring bad luck. He has no truly close friends because of his history (his close friends would die soon after meeting him, for some vague reason). 

 

Character Beliefs: He is loyal to those who are loyal to him. He does not believe in good and evil, or any sort of religion. Therefore he fights against the Greencloaks in thinking that they are misjudging the Oathbound. 

 

Spirit Animal: XingHong 

Xiye is cold to everyone but his spirit animal, whom he spends the most time with and considers to be his best friend. They will never leave one another, and both are willing to sacrifice themselves for one another if necessary. 

Xiye does not like running the risk of his spirit animal getting injured, or even killed, in battle, so he has trained himself to not be reliant on the skills he hones from his spirit animal. Nonetheless, this does not mean that he does not know how to work with his partner during battle. When the two work together they are terrifyingly efficient due to their powerful and close bond.

 

 

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It was a starry night, even though a storm had just passed. Song felt the wind glide like swans around her, as she saw some trees less than a mile ahead. "It's...it's land!" she exclaimed to herself, despite herself.

Then, everything she had done hit her like a slap to the face.

She remembered when she still had the Dragon's Eye, and its power had completely possessed her...

remembered how Meilin tried to convince her to stop... bringing down of the Summer Palace and... how she killed her own father.

Her foolish conquest for unlimited power had only served to blind herself, and even worse, the after effects of everything continued to haunt her. Would Zhong accept her? Actually, would any nation accept her, after what she had done? These questions were like bees in a beehive buzzing around a procrastinating queen.

Now that everything had passed, Song felt numb, and not just from the pain that had been suffered from the battle. She should have been dead, but... she owed her life to something... no, someone.She blinked back the tears that were already coming as swift as a storm. She was cuddled next to the body of her dead Spirit Animal, Seaspray. She couldn't fight her agony anymore... hot tears filled her eyes, and completely obstructed her vision. Would the pain ever end? She knew she had messed up everything. In her life, she had only Seaspray and Kana, but what did she do in return? She kept them away from them, only thinking about herself. And now, she had no one to lean against, and share her sorrow with.  

What made her feel worse was knowing that despite all that she had done to him, even though he had experienced her rejection, he still used his last breaths to keep her safe...

For Song there was only pain. She had failed. Again. 

The bond token, the one thing she had sacrificed everything to get, was pulled from her grasp violently by the waters, and glinted one more time in the waning light as the world grew darker and darker, before vanishing. The empress didn't want to do anything anymore. Perhaps it would be better for everyone is she disappeared in the dark blue ocean... it was too fitting a death for her...

But then her vision was filled with the sight of large green scales. Even in the limited light she could see the scales glinting and changing in color.

Seaspray? she thought. No, don't come here. Save yourself... I don't deserve it...

The once-small water dragon nudged her, though she felt his pain clearly even through her own. This was the pain she had caused everyone? Despite thinking that they were both doomed, Song couldn't help but smile. So this was why the Four Fallen were so close to their spirit animals... this was ultimately why she had never been happy...

Because she had never appreciated what she had until it was too late... wasn't that a wise Zhongenese saying?

Just thinking about her water dragon made Song smile in the midst of her tears. Should she escape to the island? Should she try to redeem herself and rectify her wrongs?

In that instant, she felt as if her companion were next to her again, carrying her to safety. She tenderly kissed Seaspray's body for the last time, and set off across the icy water.

Like you said, Father, it's never too late to redeem oneself...

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For those of us who love Spirit Animals and are sad that it's probably not going to continue in a third series...

This is your chance! Only this time, you get to make the story. And be part of it!

Request a role with Rysun (dragondolphin2613) today! Otherwise, Zia and I are also available if you have questions to ask.  

 

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Sorry it took me a bit to get here.. my little brain got confused..

 

Again, a list of characters? Is Meilin still available? If so, I’ll do her.. if not, I will think of something.

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I am a Christian, a squeaky clarinet, a forever Ravenclaw, a loyal Greencloak, a Heartland fanatic, horse crazy, a bookworm, an aspiring author.

 People laugh at me because I am different, but I laugh at them because they are ALL THE SAME.

 

 

 

 

 

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I vote on unlimited spots, I have this really great character that I want to use on something.

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I am a Christian, a squeaky clarinet, a forever Ravenclaw, a loyal Greencloak, a Heartland fanatic, horse crazy, a bookworm, an aspiring author.

 People laugh at me because I am different, but I laugh at them because they are ALL THE SAME.

 

 

 

 

 

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You might see this character on several roleplays.

 

Name: Sera Nightlifter

Age: Thirteen

Gender: Girl

Appearance: Brown hair with gold tints, cobalt blue eyes that have the look of someone taking on a huge responsibility from a young age. Pale skin, freckles. Medium height, thin.

Outfit: Cream colored jacket, cream colored beeeches, black boots, brown gloves, green cloak with gold trim.

Personality: Serious, responsible, fiercely loyal, courageous, intelligent.

Spirit Animal Species: Buckskin horse, mare.

Spirit Animal Name: Artemis

Background: Parents died in the war, lived in a rundown orphanage in Amaya with her little sister, Cindi, until taken to Greenhaven for safety after her Nectar Ceremony. Was unsure about joining the Greencloaks until Ninani sent her a dream. Insisted on taking Cindi with her to Greenhaven, isolated herself from all but Cindi and Artemis until a quest to retrieve a talisman, now friends with many. Still wary around strangers. Now we are up to date.

 

And there it is.

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I am a Christian, a squeaky clarinet, a forever Ravenclaw, a loyal Greencloak, a Heartland fanatic, horse crazy, a bookworm, an aspiring author.

 People laugh at me because I am different, but I laugh at them because they are ALL THE SAME.

 

 

 

 

 

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ok meilin is still available but your character is accepted.

And the unlimited spots part is if you make your own character.

 

 

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No problem! I’ll go ahead and be my own character, thanks. This will be fun. *rubs hands together and smiles*

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Could you please help spread this roleplay?

 

Oh and have you read the book of shane?

 

There are spoilers in there related to it in white ink.

 

Thanks!

 

Basically after the conquerers were defeated in the second debourer war they formed small rebellion groups, and a crazy conqueer called Maddox is part of one called the new conqueers, and i was wondering if you giys are ok with me adding Maddox as a character and he's the one along with his rebellion group that breaks out Horen and some other oathbound from thother ship in I mentioned in Conor's intro

 

 

Oh and please write an intro for your custom character:

 

Here is Princess Song's, Conor's, and Rollan's:

 

Princess Song's:

 

It was a starry night, even though a storm had just passed. Song felt the wind glide like swans around her, as she saw some trees less than a mile ahead. "It's...it's land!" she exclaimed to herself, despite herself.

Then, everything she had done hit her like a slap to the face.

She remembered when she still had the Dragon's Eye, and its power had completely possessed her...

She remembered how Meilin tried to convince her to stop... bringing down of the Summer Palace and... how she killed her own father.

Her foolish conquest for unlimited power had only served to blind herself, and even worse, the after effects of everything continued to haunt her. Would Zhong accept her? Actually, would any nation accept her, after what she had done? These questions were like bees in a beehive buzzing around a procrastinating queen.

Now that everything had passed, Song felt numb, and not just from the pain that had been suffered from the battle. She should have been dead, but... she owed her life to something... no, someone.She blinked back the tears that were already coming as swift as a storm. She was cuddled next to the body of her dead Spirit Animal, Seaspray. She couldn't fight her agony anymore... hot tears filled her eyes, and completely obstructed her vision. Would the pain ever end? She knew she had messed up everything. In her life, she had only Seaspray and Kana, but what did she do in return? She kept their best interests and desires away, only thinking about benefit for herself. And now, she had no one to lean against, and share her sorrow with.  

What made her feel worse was knowing that despite all that she had done to him, even though he had experienced her rejection, he still used his last breaths to keep her safe...

For Song there was only pain. She had failed. Again. 

The bond token, the one thing she had sacrificed everything to get, was pulled from her grasp violently by the waters, and glinted one more time in the waning light as the world grew darker and darker, before vanishing. The empress didn't want to do anything anymore. Perhaps it would be better for everyone is she disappeared in the dark blue ocean... it was too fitting a death for her...

But then her vision was filled with the sight of large green scales. Even in the limited light she could see the scales glinting and changing in color.

Seaspray? she thought. No, don't come here. Save yourself... I don't deserve it...

The once-small water dragon nudged her, though she felt his pain clearly even through her own. This was the pain she had caused everyone? Despite thinking that they were both doomed, Song couldn't help but smile. So this was why the Four Fallen were so close to their spirit animals... this was ultimately why she had never been happy...

Because she had never appreciated what she had until it was too late... wasn't that a wise Zhongenese saying?

Just thinking about her water dragon made Song smile in the midst of her tears. Should she escape to the island? Should she try to redeem herself and rectify her wrongs?

In that instant, she felt as if her companion were next to her again, carrying her to safety. She tenderly kissed Seaspray's body for the last time, and set off across the icy water.

Like you said, Father, it's never too late to redeem oneself...

Then, everything she had done hit her like a slap to the face.

She remembered when she still had the Dragon's Eye, and its power had completely possessed her...

remembered how Meilin tried to convince her to stop... bringing down of the Summer Palace and... how she killed her own father.

Her foolish conquest for unlimited power had only served to blind herself, and even worse, the after effects of everything continued to haunt her. Would Zhong accept her? Actually, would any nation accept her, after what she had done? These questions were like bees in a beehive buzzing around a procrastinating queen.

Now that everything had passed, Song felt numb, and not just from the pain that had been suffered from the battle. She should have been dead, but... she owed her life to something... no, someone.She blinked back the tears that were already coming as swift as a storm. She was cuddled next to the body of her dead Spirit Animal, Seaspray. She couldn't fight her agony anymore... hot tears filled her eyes, and completely obstructed her vision. Would the pain ever end? She knew she had messed up everything. In her life, she had only Seaspray and Kana, but what did she do in return? She kept them away from them, only thinking about herself. And now, she had no one to lean against, and share her sorrow with.  

What made her feel worse was knowing that despite all that she had done to him, even though he had experienced her rejection, he still used his last breaths to keep her safe...

For Song there was only pain. She had failed. Again. 

The bond token, the one thing she had sacrificed everything to get, was pulled from her grasp violently by the waters, and glinted one more time in the waning light as the world grew darker and darker, before vanishing. The empress didn't want to do anything anymore. Perhaps it would be better for everyone is she disappeared in the dark blue ocean... it was too fitting a death for her...

But then her vision was filled with the sight of large green scales. Even in the limited light she could see the scales glinting and changing in color.

Seaspray? she thought. No, don't come here. Save yourself... I don't deserve it...

The once-small water dragon nudged her, though she felt his pain clearly even through her own. This was the pain she had caused everyone? Despite thinking that they were both doomed, Song couldn't help but smile. So this was why the Four Fallen were so close to their spirit animals... this was ultimately why she had never been happy...

Because she had never appreciated what she had until it was too late... wasn't that a wise Zhongenese saying?

Just thinking about her water dragon made Song smile in the midst of her tears. Should she escape to the island? Should she try to redeem herself and rectify her wrongs?

In that instant, she felt as if her companion were next to her again, carrying her to safety. She tenderly kissed Seaspray's body for the last time, and set off across the icy water.

Like you said, Father, it's never too late to redeem oneself…

As she felt her numb hand start pushing water faster and harder, she immediately got a new drive to push forward and get to the island as she would hate to see herself drown or die before even getting a chance to redeem herself. Stroke by stroke she pushed herself, not only mentally but also physically.

As she finally stepped onto land, she couldn't help by notice a small mound near the shore on the island.  She slowly dug in that area and found a small vial underneath. A message on a thin piece of paper was attached to the vial. It said: This is a mix of Nectar and Bile, the most precious research material of the Conquerers in the time of the Second Devourer War, this rare concoction has the ability to revive any Spirit Animal. However, it would retain the memories of its previous life and could act like a completely different animal…

“I assume there will be some side effects, but they can’t be too serious…” thought Song. She decided to drink the vial, as for everything she put her spirit animal to, he stood fast to their bond and was always kind. As she opened the cap of the vial, she noticed how the cap had been discolored by years of being submerged with the filthy soil.

She could remember the sweet taste of Nectar as she drank the contents of the vial, but there was this oily, slimy liquid mixed in with it that felt like it stuck to the back of her throat, and it tasted horrible.

When she finished the concoction, white light started pouring down from the sky straight down to the spot directly next to her.

Suddenly, like a flash of lightning, there was an explosion of white light at that spot that blinded her for a couple seconds.

When she opened her eyes again, there was Seaspray, despite the fact that he was small like his original size, his greenish-blue scales glistened in the pale moonlight and changed color. He stared at her, kindly, but she could still feel a sense of bitterness and a feeling of being hurt in the water dragon.

“I am sorry for everything,” Song told her Spirit Animal as she stroked his head gently, he looked at her, but she could feel how she disrespected him and how he was very hurt by her actions.

 

 Rollan's:

 

 

Rollan felt a sense of freedom as he flew among essix in the sky using Tarik’s cloak, the Bond Token he and Essix shared. “This is what Essix feels all the time,” thought Rollan, “It must be great to be a falcon!

He looked down and saw Chief Ugo’s ship and his friends on the deck as they headed to Nilo. He njoyed the feeling when the wind rustled his hair, even though he was sure it messed up his hair and gave it a choppy style. 

“Meilin will like it better this way,” he chuckled. He smiled with relish as the soft, gentle breeze tickled his chin & nose.

Trailing behind the larger ship was a slightly smaller Zhongese vessel whose hull was filled with minor Oathbound Commanders in cells. And it just turned around and started heading to Zhong.

“Let’s check it out, shall we Essix?” said Rollan. He and the bird dove down to check on the ship, but then, a large burly man saw them and ordered archers to shoot them. They were chased out of the sky and then Rollan started losing control.

Conor was the first of his friends to notice him, he watched him jump when Rollan shrieked, then Meilin and Abeke noticed him, but something unexpected happened. Meilin ran to catch him!

“No, no, no!” thought Rollan, this will be embarrassing. He covered his eyes and expected Meilin to not reach him in time and he falls through the deck and into one of the cells below deck holding Kana, Sid, Brunhild, Wikam and Cordelia.

The wooden deck got dangerous close, then suddenly, it stopped. Rollan rolled over and looked up. “Of course Meilin will end up catching me” he thought. “Hey, it should be other way around!” laughed Rollan. Meilin dropped him out of fustration.

“Ow!” he said, rubbing the back of his head.

“What happened?” asked Abeke. The girl extended an arm. Rollan took it and started uncontrollably stammering, “I-I-I, you know the vessel Zhong has sent us holding all of the minor Oathbound commanders, like Horen the Forgiving and Brinking the Gentle, it just turned around and is heading back to Zhong.”…

 


 

 Conor's:

 

 

The sky was cloudy with flashes of sunlight scattered across the sky, as if they were small boats among the vast oceans of Erdas. Or it would be a quilt, with gray & the occassional, small yellow pieces of cloth. Or at least that was how Conor pictured it to be like.

Conor clutched the Shepherd's Crook tightly; no, it wasn’t just a Shepherd's Crook, but the Bond Token he and Briggan shared. He felt how it combined he and Briggan’s memories, giving him seemingly unlimited descriptive words and phrases.

He paced on the deck, before he heard Essix’s shrill cry and Rollan’s shriek at the exact same time as they plumented towards the deck of the ship. Did something go wrong with their bond token...?

Essix of course made a graceful and coordinated landing, but as for Rollan, not so much. Conor, who expected a couple broken bones and many groans, and as a boy with a soft heart, immediately covered his eyes, cringing.

He heard immediate, loud, and sudden footsteps, a loud “Aaahh”, and then a sigh. He opened his eyes, and he was shocked.

It appeared that Meilin had rushed to Rollan and caught him. “Hey, it should be the other way around!” the other boy laughed. Meilin, who was frustrated with his carelessness, dropped him with a thud on the hard wooden deck. “Ow,” he said, rubbing the back of his head.

“What happened?” asked Abeke, who had just arrived on the scene, offering him a hand.

“I-I-I,” Rollan stammered, “You know the vessel Zhong has sent us holding all of the minor Oathbound commanders, like Horen the Forgiving and Brinkin the Gentle? It just turned around and is heading back to Zhong. Essix and I tried to get closer and this man-- and he looked just like Barlow on our first quest-- he saw me and he ordered archers to shoot at us and we were chased away. I won't shoot at birds ever again, even if they're spying for the enemy. I know how it feels now.”

“Wait a minute,” Meilin interrupted, ignoring his joke. “You said the man looked like Barlow from our quest for the Granite Ram?”

“Yes,” replied Rollan firmly.

“It’s Horen,” gasped Abeke.

 

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To me, you did Princess Song’s intro the best. Conor’s is good too, just not as good as her’s. Rollan’s does need a bit of work, though. Read through them and you’ll see what I’m talking about.

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Will do. Dusk might be interested. She will probably invite others. How is this for an intro?

 

Of Sera:

 

 I woke up in a lumpy bed covered with a thin quilt. Shivering, I sat up and rubbed the sleep out of my eyes. Before I could think, I slammed my feet on the cold, hard floor and began to pick out an everyday outfit. Then I remembered that today was my Nectar Ceremony.

 I switched to my best clothes. They were nothing compared to what the wealthy families’ children would be wearing today, but they would do.

 Just then, I heard footsteps. I swiveled my head around to see Mrs. Hanson. The old widow’s lips were tight, and a frown furrowed in her forehead. She motioned for me to wake Cindi, my little sister, up.

 I tiptoed across the floor in stockinged feet and stroked her golden hair. “Wake up, Cindi.”, I whispered. She opened her eyes slowly and gave me a sleepy smile. She also pulled on clothes. Mrs. Hanson beckoned for us to follow her. 

 She led us to the town square, where it seemed the whole of Amaya was watching us. There were two others there for their ceremony besides me, a boy and a girl. A Greencloak held a bottle in her hand. The Nectar of Ninani glinted amber in the sunlight.

 She let the boy have a sip. Nothing happened. The girl had a sip. Same result. And then me. I had almost no hope of summoning a spirit animal. My job was to take care of Cindi, and that meant being realistic. The odds were entirely against my favor. Even so, I had always dreamed of summoning a spirit animal.

 I sipped the Nectar. It tasted sweet, like honey. And then, a roll of thunder sounded, and a flash of lightning hit the earth before me. Out of it came a beautiful buckskin horse, galloping toward me. She was quick as an arrow, and graceful as a deer. She stopped before me and lowered her golden nose to my face. I breathed in her sweet smell, and touched my hand to her forehead, on which was a golden star. “Artemis,” I whispered. She nickered softly, and then tossed her head into the hair and whinnied. Cindi cheered. The whole town was shouting for me. I smiled the hugest smile I could ever smile.

 “We must head to Greenhaven at once.” The Greencloak told me. “The Conquerors are heading this way.”

 “I’m not leaving without Cindi!”, I protested. The woman simply nodded. “Of course,” she said. “And call me Lenori.”

 

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Just a quick note:

 

I like your intro but it seems to be set in the second devourer war time frame but the roleplay's setting is the events after dragon's eye.

 

Just wanted to let you know, and thanks for your feedback!

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Hi forestclue25, 

Of course. We corrected Song's intro a lot and sort of edited Conor's, though this is the first time Rollan's came up. 

To Yang Shan: Please do what I mentioned in the other post, and put the Four Fallen's intro together. Or should I work on that? I feel like you're doing too much work around here. :/

No offense, of course. 

Forestclue: Could you help revise them please? And btw, can you go onto the chat thread we have named "chat thread for zia, ruohan, and I" so other people don't see as much of what we're writing that is not relevant to the RP.

Or, YangShan, I'm thinking we may have to move the entire RP thread after everything's sorted out. And when will the RP start? I will not have much time after July. :(

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Rysun, 

After reading what you wrote, I feel like to write a character intro for all of the Four Fallen would be basically the same, so please change it to third person perspective. This way it is not repetitive. 

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hi forestclue25, 

I hope you get used to my wordiness as soon as you can because I can't help it, xD. 

Firstly is he issue where Rysun addressed. This is at the timeline of the Second Devourer War, in which the RP takes place. I think it's fine that you are introducing Artemis and how you two came together, but can you add more so that the reader knows when the plot takes place?

Second, I like your attention to details but I think it could improve further. For instance, dialogue does not dominate your narrative but you could add more depth to places, such as when she's walking up to the Greencloaks to drink the Nectar. Then you could also think of her feelings as Lenori is speaking to her. These are only examples; please excuse me. :D

I can only write so much right now, please tell me what you think. And you can call me RuoHan. 

 

And by the way, Yang Shan, I need to proofread my draft and submit it onto the chat thread. 

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Yeah could you please put the Four Fallen's intro together?

 

I have been really stressed and tired, and plus I have been sparring this whole week at Tae Kwon Do.

 And I agree with the new RP thread and the RP will probably start begininning-mid July

 

 

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Thanks for the suggestions.

 

I’ll go to the thread and we can all work on this. We just need to revise Rollan’s and Conor’s a bit to make it as good as Princess Song’s.

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Yang Shan,

Sure thing!

Like I said, I know we all are busy. Don't get too stressed; always give yourself time for breaks and relaxation.

That is good; that leaves a lot of time for us to get everything done and in order, and for more people to join!

Btw, I think my instructor in Tae Kwon Do tried to beat me in training, but I got better and didn't let that happen, xD.

 

Note: I will submit both the draft of Xi Ye's intro and the one for the Four Fallen soon.

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Yeah, I working really hard to rise to the top in sparring and won 1st Place in a in-class tournament a couple months ago...

 

 

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I know, right?

Sometimes I don't think my instructors care about my schedule, they send me to a tournament every month, and even though I win they keep pushing me! I mean, I like to improve, but seriously, give me a weekly break or something. :(

 

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Here is the rewritten version of the Four Fallen's intro I promised.

Btw, I just realized that in Song's intro there's a part that is repeated, which I put in red font:

It was a starry night, even though a storm had just passed. Song felt the wind glide like swans around her, as she saw some trees less than a mile ahead. "It's...it's land!" she exclaimed to herself, despite herself.

Then, everything she had done hit her like a slap to the face.

She remembered when she still had the Dragon's Eye, and its power had completely possessed her...

She remembered how Meilin tried to convince her to stop... bringing down of the Summer Palace and... how she killed her own father.

Her foolish conquest for unlimited power had only served to blind herself, and even worse, the after effects of everything continued to haunt her. Would Zhong accept her? Actually, would any nation accept her, after what she had done? These questions were like bees in a beehive buzzing around a procrastinating queen.

Now that everything had passed, Song felt numb, and not just from the pain that had been suffered from the battle. She should have been dead, but... she owed her life to something... no, someone.She blinked back the tears that were already coming as swift as a storm. She was cuddled next to the body of her dead Spirit Animal, Seaspray. She couldn't fight her agony anymore... hot tears filled her eyes, and completely obstructed her vision. Would the pain ever end? She knew she had messed up everything. In her life, she had only Seaspray and Kana, but what did she do in return? She kept their best interests and desires away, only thinking about benefit for herself. And now, she had no one to lean against, and share her sorrow with.  

What made her feel worse was knowing that despite all that she had done to him, even though he had experienced her rejection, he still used his last breaths to keep her safe...

For Song there was only pain. She had failed. Again. 

The bond token, the one thing she had sacrificed everything to get, was pulled from her grasp violently by the waters, and glinted one more time in the waning light as the world grew darker and darker, before vanishing. The empress didn't want to do anything anymore. Perhaps it would be better for everyone is she disappeared in the dark blue ocean... it was too fitting a death for her...

But then her vision was filled with the sight of large green scales. Even in the limited light she could see the scales glinting and changing in color.

Seaspray? she thought. No, don't come here. Save yourself... I don't deserve it...

The once-small water dragon nudged her, though she felt his pain clearly even through her own. This was the pain she had caused everyone? Despite thinking that they were both doomed, Song couldn't help but smile. So this was why the Four Fallen were so close to their spirit animals... this was ultimately why she had never been happy...

Because she had never appreciated what she had until it was too late... wasn't that a wise Zhongenese saying?

Just thinking about her water dragon made Song smile in the midst of her tears. Should she escape to the island? Should she try to redeem herself and rectify her wrongs?

In that instant, she felt as if her companion were next to her again, carrying her to safety. She tenderly kissed Seaspray's body for the last time, and set off across the icy water.

Like you said, Father, it's never too late to redeem oneself...

Then, everything she had done hit her like a slap to the face.

She remembered when she still had the Dragon's Eye, and its power had completely possessed her...

remembered how Meilin tried to convince her to stop... bringing down of the Summer Palace and... how she killed her own father.

Her foolish conquest for unlimited power had only served to blind herself, and even worse, the after effects of everything continued to haunt her. Would Zhong accept her? Actually, would any nation accept her, after what she had done? These questions were like bees in a beehive buzzing around a procrastinating queen.

Now that everything had passed, Song felt numb, and not just from the pain that had been suffered from the battle. She should have been dead, but... she owed her life to something... no, someone.She blinked back the tears that were already coming as swift as a storm. She was cuddled next to the body of her dead Spirit Animal, Seaspray. She couldn't fight her agony anymore... hot tears filled her eyes, and completely obstructed her vision. Would the pain ever end? She knew she had messed up everything. In her life, she had only Seaspray and Kana, but what did she do in return? She kept them away from them, only thinking about herself. And now, she had no one to lean against, and share her sorrow with.  

What made her feel worse was knowing that despite all that she had done to him, even though he had experienced her rejection, he still used his last breaths to keep her safe...

For Song there was only pain. She had failed. Again. 

The bond token, the one thing she had sacrificed everything to get, was pulled from her grasp violently by the waters, and glinted one more time in the waning light as the world grew darker and darker, before vanishing. The empress didn't want to do anything anymore. Perhaps it would be better for everyone is she disappeared in the dark blue ocean... it was too fitting a death for her...

But then her vision was filled with the sight of large green scales. Even in the limited light she could see the scales glinting and changing in color.

Seaspray? she thought. No, don't come here. Save yourself... I don't deserve it...

The once-small water dragon nudged her, though she felt his pain clearly even through her own. This was the pain she had caused everyone? Despite thinking that they were both doomed, Song couldn't help but smile. So this was why the Four Fallen were so close to their spirit animals... this was ultimately why she had never been happy...

Because she had never appreciated what she had until it was too late... wasn't that a wise Zhongenese saying?

Just thinking about her water dragon made Song smile in the midst of her tears. Should she escape to the island? Should she try to redeem herself and rectify her wrongs?

In that instant, she felt as if her companion were next to her again, carrying her to safety. She tenderly kissed Seaspray's body for the last time, and set off across the icy water.

Like you said, Father, it's never too late to redeem oneself…

As she felt her numb hand start pushing water faster and harder, she immediately got a new drive to push forward and get to the island, as she would hate to see herself drown or die before even getting a chance to redeem herself. Stroke by stroke she pushed herself, not only mentally but also physically.

As she finally stepped onto land, she couldn't help by notice a small mound near the shore on the island.  She slowly dug in that area and found a small vial underneath. A message on a thin piece of paper was attached to the vial. It said: This is a mix of Nectar and Bile, the most precious research material of the Conquerers in the time of the Second Devourer War, this rare concoction has the ability to revive any Spirit Animal. However, it would retain the memories of its previous life and could act like a completely different animal…

“I assume there will be some side effects, but they can’t be too serious…” thought Song. She decided to drink the vial, as for everything she put her spirit animal to, he stood fast to their bond and was always kind. As she opened the cap of the vial, she noticed how the cap had been discolored by years of being submerged with the filthy soil.

She could remember the sweet taste of Nectar as she drank the contents of the vial, but there was this oily, slimy liquid mixed in with it that felt like it stuck to the back of her throat, and it tasted horrible.

When she finished the concoction, white light started pouring down from the sky straight down to the spot directly next to her.

Suddenly, like a flash of lightning, there was an explosion of white light at that spot that blinded her for a couple seconds.

When she opened her eyes again, there was Seaspray, despite the fact that he was small like his original size, his greenish-blue scales glistened in the pale moonlight and changed color. He stared at her, kindly, but she could still feel a sense of bitterness and a feeling of being hurt in the water dragon.

“I am sorry for everything,” Song told her Spirit Animal as she stroked his head gently, he looked at her, but she could feel how she disrespected him and how he was very hurt by her actions.

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Please delete one of the ones I bolded. I would prefer it if the one I put in red font was deleted, the prior one fits in much better.

And as for the Four Fallen's:

 

 

Rollan felt a sense of freedom as he flew with Essix in the sky using Tarik’s cloak, the bond token he and Essix shared. This is what Essix feels all the time, thought Rollan in wonderment. It must be great to be a falcon!

He looked down and saw Chief Ugo’s ship and his friends on the deck as they headed to Nilo. He enjoyed the feeling when the wind rustled his hair, even though he was sure it messed up his hair and gave it a choppy style. 

“Meilin will like it better this way,” he chuckled to himself. He smiled with relish as the soft, gentle breeze tickled his chin and nose.

Trailing behind the larger ship was a slightly smaller Zhongese vessel whose hull was filled with minor Oathbound Commanders in cells. And then it just completely turned around and started heading in the direction of Zhong. Rollan frowned in puzzlement, as did Essix, who turned and looked at him.

"Let's check it out, shall we, Essix?" asked Rollan. The falcon squawked in agreement.

He and the bird dove down to check on the ship, but before they had a good chance to observe what was really happening, a large burly man saw them, and ordered archers to shoot. They were chased out of the sky and then Rollan started losing control.
The sky was cloudy with flashes of sunlight scattered across the sky, as if they were small boats among the vast oceans of Erdas. Or it would be a quilt, with gray & the occassional, small yellow pieces of cloth. Or at least that was how Conor pictured it to be like.

Conor clutched the Shepherd's Crook tightly; no, it wasn’t just a Shepherd's Crook, but the Bond Token he and Briggan shared. He felt how it combined he and Briggan’s memories, giving him seemingly unlimited descriptive words and phrases.

He paced on the deck, before he heard Essix’s shrill cry and Rollan’s shriek at the exact same time as they plummeted towards the deck of the ship. Did something go wrong with their bond token...?

Essix of course made a graceful and coordinated landing, but as for Rollan, not so much. Conor, who expected a couple broken bones and many groans, and as a boy with a soft heart, immediately covered his eyes, cringing. It almost appeared as if Rollan would smash headfirst into the decks below, which were holding Kana, Brunhild, Wikam, and Sid.

He heard immediate, loud, and sudden footsteps, a loud “Aaahhh!”, and then a sigh of relief. He opened his eyes, and he was shocked.

It appeared that Meilin had rushed to Rollan and caught him. “Hey, it should be the other way around!” the other boy laughed, but not without relief. Meilin, frustrated with his carelessness, dropped him with a thud on the hard wooden deck. “Ow,” he said, rubbing the back of his head.

“What happened?” asked Abeke, who had just arrived on the scene, offering him a hand.

“I-I-I,” Rollan stammered, taking her outstretched hand, “You know the vessel Zhong has sent us holding all of the minor Oathbound commanders, like Horen the Forgiving and Brinkin the Gentle? It just turned around and is heading back to Zhong. Essix and I tried to get closer and this man-- and he looked just like Barlow on our first quest-- he saw me and ordered archers to shoot at us and we were chased away. I won't shoot at birds ever again, even if they're spying for the enemy. I know how it feels now.”

“Wait a minute,” Meilin interrupted, ignoring his joke. “You said the man looked like Barlow from our quest for the Granite Ram?”

“Yes,” replied Rollan firmly.

“Horen,” gasped Abeke.

Conor was familiar with this name. "Not Horen!" he rasped.

"So the Oathbound are free again?" Meilin asked worriedly.

Abeke sighed. "It looks as if a small majority is, at the moment."

"Wait, wait, wait, wait, wait," Rollan interrupted, looking confused at all of his three friends. "What's going on? What is that about the Oathbound being free?"

Meilin looked exasperated. "A group of Oathbound has gotten free from captivity and are now heading towards Zhongwhat, and among them is Horen the Forgiving, who is a formidable opponent. Do you remember Barlow? He looks like that, only he doesn't have a bear for a spirit animal and he isn't on the side of good." 

Rollan's jaw was hanging open. "But aren't they supposed to go to Greenhaven for their trial?"

Conor sighed. "It looks like that will be postponed for the moment," he said.

The four friends looked at each other worriedly. It looked like, once again, Erdas had something to worry about.

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Sorry, my keyboard is being a complete(!) nuisance! And it is going at like 30 WPM, even though I type 93 WPM! Urgh!

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