Hello again Swampy!
I usually wake up around 9:00 AM - 9:30 AM, and stay up writing, playing video games, and watching TV until 'bout 12:00 AM - 1:00 AM, that's why every once in a while, I just get extra rest and go to sleep ever...
My sisters can get really hyper sometimes...all the times I mean! XD
Yes, Tom and Katie (oops, meant Tomie :D) were planned to be a couple from the very beginning!
I will have to remove the mirror part, because it's a two seated Ferrai, and Katie's sitting the passenger front seat (meant front passenger seat), and here is my finsihed (I think, unlss you have more imput) version of chapter 4:
Chapter 4: Tom can Drive, even on a highway!
“Wait,” Katie said, “There are only 2 seats, yet there are 3 OF US!”
“One of us will have to leave,” she added, “Mr. Ranchini, you could get some exercise,” she said jokingly, pretending like he had a large stomach, “While Tom drives me…”
“Fine with me then,” Mr. Raci handed Tom the keys,”You should know how to drive boy, you will be doing a lot of that once you’re done with training…”
Mr. Raci began his long jog. “Hurry up Tom!” “It’s my first time driving, you little brat!” “Ho-How, could you say that to a lady like me, Tom?” she said accusingly.
“Shut up Katie, the first person to say you’re a lady will be m-“ he stopped himself, “Your mom,” he said slowly as he tried to save himself, in fear of revealing his secret.
“Wow,” Katie said in pretend awe, “Hurry up and drive, just don’t get us killed!”
Tom started the Ferrai’s engine. “Boy, were those engines loud revving up,” he thought. He backed out of the parking lot like a pro, then sped up to the speed limit of 55 in a matter of seconds.
“Wow,” Katie said, “I guess you do have some talent, but think about it, isn’t the car doing most of the work?”
Tom sighed heavily, “Unlike you, even if I don’t have talent and the car does, do you have any?”
Katie thought for a couple moments, “Yes, of course, I can get so many boyfriends if I wanted to,” she showed her beautiful, stunning face to Tom.
“But you aren’t good at keeping them,” Tom said with an eyebrow raised, “Or are you?”
“I was going to keep y-“ Katie had to force herself to stop, “No, now’s not the time,” thought Katie.
“You like me?” Tom asked accusingly, “I thought you considered me a son of a witch!”
“No, I would never say that! I didn’t even consider posting on the Witch gone crazy Instagram photo challenge!” she suddenly clasped her hand over her mouth.
“Says the bratty lady-“ Tom stopped himself, “bratty, annoying girl that has maintained a winner streak on that photo challenge for 5 whole years!”
“No, my parents only have 2nd and 3rd place though,” Katie tried to take the blame off herself, and push it to her parents.
“While you had 1st place!” Tom yelled back, looking back at the girl trying to look as innocent as she could. Katie flashed her beautiful, stunning face again at Tom, but she looked away sadly, as she could tell it couldn’t work as well anymore.
“AAAHHHH!” Katie screamed as she looked ahead. “What is it?” Tom looked back again. There was a loud skkkkkrrrr-aaaat as Tom suddenly turned the Ferrari away from the cliff, and Katie watched nervously as the car pushed rocks down as it struggled to save itself.
“You could have killed me! What would you say if I died?!” she asked angrily, still in extreme shock.
“Oops, at least I got the trouble out of my life,” he said as he sneered, jokingly at her from the rear view mirror.
“We’re here,” said Tom, startling an absent minded Katie. “Where are we going?” How do you know this is the right place?”
“We are at Fort Braker. My dad used to take me here to honor my Great-Grandfather Greg’s death protecting it when it used to have the name Fort Fusion. The two major forts in the USA right now are Fort Braker and Fort Furious, where my Great-Grandfather Greg and his son, my grandfather trained and were stationed respectively.”
“Tom, will you join the US military later on?” Katie asked, accidently shedding light on some of her feelings, “Will I still see you?” For some odd reason, she started to cry.
“Why else would I be recruited and sent to a fort by Donald J. Trump?” said Tom with a long sigh.
“To get away from your broke parents,” Katie suggested with a shrug, as if the comment was no big deal.
“I know my parents are almost bankrupt,” Tom said solemnly, “BUT IT’S NOT A MATTER FOR YOU TO JOKE ABOUT IT, KATIE!” He started yelling out of anger.
“Hey Tom, calm down, remember, a gentleman nevers yells at a lady.”
“Who said you were a lady?” asked Tom mockingly.
“Who said you were a gentleman?”
Suddenly, someone in a miltary uniform came into view. Tom quickly swerved away, heading to the Elite Member’s parking area.
“You were about to hit someone!” Katie exclaimed, like most of her other words and comments, it was somewhat obnoxious, to someone who knew what they were doing.
“You know Katie,” Tom said with a smirk, “If you’re on the streets, alone, and you aren’t paying attention, just annoying people with your obnoxious comments, you could get hit by a car, when crossing the street…”
“Did I hear the breeze say something?” Katie commented as she leaned sideways, since they were moving more slowly now that they were in the fort.
Tom suddenly sped up, on purpose, so that Katie’s head suddenly slammed onto her headrest. “Owww,” she complained.
As Tom parked swiftly in a lot in the Elite Member’s parking area, Katie opened the passenger’s door and leaped out while the car moved slowly.
She walked to Tom’s side, waiting for him.
“So Katie, are you going to be quiet now?” Tom asked.
“Maaaybbbe,” she said annoyingly.
Suddenly, she heard loud gunshots coming from the gun-training part of Fort Braker, she started getting strong, vivid memories, then got completely lost in them.
How is it?
Can I post it now?
P.S. *Tiger's friend from school dies of laughter reading Chapter 4*