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arrowartemis53

 

*cough* This is a little story intro I made when I couldn't sleep as I was high off of candy...any comments on how to improve would be nice. Or if you'd want to read more, I would consider continuing. Anywhoooo, hope ya enjoy ^-^

 

 

 

 

  I walk down the dark road, lit up by dim lamp lights on ether side. I pull my hoodie down further and continue walking as I mentally scream at myself to turn back around. But I don't. I know the consequences of what I'm about to do. I know that if the Time Control catches me they'll take all my Time left on my wrist. Ill die.

 

 

    I turn into a dark alley way. I cling to the wall and never look up. First mistake. As I focus my gaze below, i see a man across from me, lying down on the dirt gravel. His head slinks to the side and his arms are spread wide, one hoisted up by the wall. I stop and look closer. He wears a short sleeve shirt. What a fool, he must know that wearing short sleeves are dangerous. I suddenly go pale and slowly move my eyes to his left wrist, closest to me. I gasp slightly and cling to the wall even more. There on his wrist, where neon blue numbers, ticking away, should be, are replaced with black zeros. I shudder. His time was up...he's dead.

 

 

Instinctively, I pull my own sleeve up and look at my wrist. A Neon blue light dimly illuminates my face as I look down at my own timer.

 

Twenty minutes.
I will die in twenty minutes.

 

I pull my sleeve down and continue walking, not giving the dead man a second glance. I pick up my pace and turn the corner onto Main Street. I have to do this. My life depends on it. I have to rob the Time Management Bank.

 

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To be continued........maybe..

 

 

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dragonheart5528

MAKE MORE NOW

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YES

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twice as strong

still alive

we've made it this far

we know how to survive

 

~mills

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dragonflyhawk130

Wow! Just wow! This is amazing! Anything I write while on a sugar rush is crazy and makes no sense but this is incredible!

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Call me Dawn!

Female

 

~Queen of Books~

 

 Homethread @349256

 

Library Nerd!

 

#Avidreader

#Lockwood&Co.

#SixofCrows

 

 

Weekly Quote:

"Be a voice, not an echo." - Unknown

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arrowartemis53

Saltie Sis - OKIE!!! maybe

 

Mills - thank you xd

 

 

 

 

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ᴏʜ sɪʟʟʏ ɢɪʀʟ. ɴᴏ ᴍᴀᴛᴛᴇʀ ʜᴏᴡ ʙɪɢ ᴏғ ᴀ ɢᴀʟᴀxʏ ʜᴇ ɪs ɪɴ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴇʏᴇs, ʏᴏᴜ'ʟʟ ɴᴇᴠᴇʀ ʙᴇ ᴍᴏʀᴇ ᴛʜᴀɴ ᴀ sɪɴɢʟᴇ sᴛᴀʀ ɪɴsɪᴅᴇ ᴏғ ʜɪs. -ᴀ.ᴇ.ᴇ

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dragonheart5528

:o Saltie Sis

 

I love that

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weren't you gonna make this a rp? 

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                KEY   

 You think that I'm okay but I'm just hiding behind a smile  

 We'll get through this 

Twice as strong 

Still alive 

 

#SPAT

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arrowartemis53

Dawn - thank you so much!!! 

 

Jazz - yeee :3

 

Key - yeah, I was going to but I made it into a story instead

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ᴏʜ sɪʟʟʏ ɢɪʀʟ. ɴᴏ ᴍᴀᴛᴛᴇʀ ʜᴏᴡ ʙɪɢ ᴏғ ᴀ ɢᴀʟᴀxʏ ʜᴇ ɪs ɪɴ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴇʏᴇs, ʏᴏᴜ'ʟʟ ɴᴇᴠᴇʀ ʙᴇ ᴍᴏʀᴇ ᴛʜᴀɴ ᴀ sɪɴɢʟᴇ sᴛᴀʀ ɪɴsɪᴅᴇ ᴏғ ʜɪs. -ᴀ.ᴇ.ᴇ

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MARI, HON, THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. 

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#Puppy Killed Me#

ocean’s mb sis

Goodbye, my dear friends. It’s been fun. 

So raise your glass high, for tomorrow we die.

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cool I like it 

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Nebur

homethread /313731

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lionphoenix181

i'd pay to read more

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Eclipse Queerson

Pelus

Silverwing

Nyra/Thomas/Lunar/Emily/Freya/Will/

i'm straightn't

she/her

Slytherpuff

#AllPeopleArePeople

@/297982

hey: never gonna give you up

20bi-teen, mon amies

coulbe gayer

my battery is low

and its getting dark

- rip oppy

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flashphoenix9

This is rlly goood. More! More!

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FLASH

QUEER PRIDE :D

PINOY PRIDE

i am queer and half asian and i love hedgehogs and tacos weee

STOP HOMOPHOBIA IN RPs

HATELOVE

 

 

 

 

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arrowartemis53

Thank you all so much! Since you all seem to really like it, I'll be posting the end of chapter one tonight!!

 

again, thanks for all your support, I really thought this thread would be ignored xd

 

Hmmm, also I was wondering if anyone had ideas about what I should title it. Time in Our Hands, maybe? Idk 

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dragonheart5528

YAY MORE OF IT TO READ

I love that title! :P

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