well I finally got enough confidence to do this thanks to me twin ^-^ alright so in this thread I will post the songs that I've written and songs that I'm working on. I would much appreciate all the feed back I can get even if it's bad cause how can I get better if someone doesn't tell me? So please don't be afraid to say something bad about a song I won't be offended or hurt in any way. Well here's my first song I hope you enjoy ^-^ 

 

 

         Love At First Sight         

 

 

ba da ba da ba da da

Ba da ba da ba da da 

Wooo oh oh (hey) 

 

I was walking on the street with my head down low (woo oh oh) 

Feelin the pressure of the world on my shoulders (hey hey) 

My money my money was running low low low (mm mm) 

My heart was heavy

My soul had no fire

My dreams were broken

Had no hope for love 

 

I saw your face my heart skipped a beat 

Your eyes glanced at me 

I felt a spark 

Had nothing to lose 

I took the risk 

 

Walked up walked up 

Heart beating fast fast now 

You gave a warm smile and said yes 

 

CHORUS: 

 

You caught my attention 

You took my hand and my heart (woo hey hey) 

You became my fire ( fire) 

Made me feel alive and mighty fine 

Whenever I'm with you

That's when i knew it was love at first sight

Love at first sight 

 

Ba da ba da ba da da 

Ba da ba da ba da da 

Wooo hey hey 

 

 

It feels so right with you by my side 

My dreams are of many now 

My soul is blazing

My heart is lite 

 

Got my head up high

feelin like touching the clouds (clouds) 

The pressure is gone 

My money may be low but i got you by my side

 

Yeah love shook us 

Love at First sight (hey)

Saw it in your eyes (hey) 

Livin on cloud nine (hey) 

And now you 

 

CHORUS: 

 

you caught my attention 

You took my hand and my heart (woo hey hey) 

You became my fire (fire) 

Made me feel alive and mighty fine 

Whenever I'm with you you you

That's when i knew it was love at first sight

Love at first sight 

 

Ba da ba da ba da da 

Ba da ba da ba da da 

Woo hey hey 

That's what they call love at first sight 

 

(Credit to Christy for helping me with the chorus a little) 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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                KEY   

 You think that I'm okay but I'm just hiding behind a smile  

 We'll get through this 

Twice as strong 

Still alive 

 

#SPAT

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flashphoenix9

I really like the lyrics, good job!! :)

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                KEY   

 You think that I'm okay but I'm just hiding behind a smile  

 We'll get through this 

Twice as strong 

Still alive 

 

#SPAT

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dogyellow583

heyyyy look at you being brave and posting your lyrics for people to see :) good job...!

 

It a little difficult to judge completely without hearing it to a tune but I can imagine this being a super happy and upbeat song that people would really like! hope more people get to see this and that someday we'll be hearing your songs also put to music :)

 

-will be back when there are more lyrics >:)-

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       Christy ~  currently trying to figure out what’s wrong with me 

I haven't quite figure out the tune I want for it i've had a couple ideas like a mix of "85" by Andy Grammer and "Happiness" by NEEDTOBREATHE but then I sang it to myself and sounded something more like "Incredible" by Oh The Larcent. I base the tune off of songs I already know cause I am not musically talented in that way, I just write lyrics. I would like to some day be able to put my songs to music but I haven't found anyone to help me with that or had enough confidence to do that so. 

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                KEY   

 You think that I'm okay but I'm just hiding behind a smile  

 We'll get through this 

Twice as strong 

Still alive 

 

#SPAT

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stormpenguin58

I LOVE IT KEY, KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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VIXEN

 

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CATHOLIC

JEDI MASTER

GRYFFINDOR

 

ALL THE GEORGES IN ICELAND ARE PRAISING YOU RIGHT NOW

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#SOKEEFE

 

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ALL THE GOERGES IN ICELAND ARE PRAISING YOU RIGHT NOW

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Thanks guys ^-^ thank you all so much. I'll be posting one if my rock songs tonight.^-^ 

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                KEY   

 You think that I'm okay but I'm just hiding behind a smile  

 We'll get through this 

Twice as strong 

Still alive 

 

#SPAT